Man I really liked your story, it was deep! Some advice that applies to everyone. You did a good job on your sound effects, they were well placed and added a nice depth to the story. It’s funny to imagine you asking random older guys to read the part for you.
I’m sure you already know that the music at the end is a little loud, makes it hard to hear your voice. But overall, great job!
Man I really liked your story, it was deep! Some advice that applies to everyone. You did a good job on your sound effects, they were well placed and added a nice depth to the story. It’s funny to imagine you asking random older guys to read the part for you.
I’m sure you already know that the music at the end is a little loud, makes it hard to hear your voice. But overall, great job!